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Pride 'Pt. I of 7 Sins' by ~Shermonic-Demon:iconShermonic-Demon:



Such Beauty at my fingertips
So much Beauty left untouched

Anestheticised Ignorance

Scalpel flashes silver
                 smoothly
                            softly
                                  silently

Fullfilling my macabre desires
Revelling in your untarnised Beauty
Slicing through your tender flesh

Every
                                          Gentle
             Incision

Puts a stop to your Beauty
If only you weren't so fucking
                                        PROUD!


Relishing every stitch
Your Beauty is your downfall
And oh! How
                Far
                  You
                      Have
               

                       Fallen!

Modern Age Artist
Its my joy to make you Beautiful
To create a true Masterpiece

Your Skin so supple
I have made you Beautiful
Like wet clay beneath these hands

Where is youre Pride now?
You are so Beautiful
Your Punishment fits your Crime

I have worked so hard
What do you mean you arent Beautiful?
Ungrateful WHORE! You Asked For This!


                               Because you were so Proud
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Author's Comments

I was listening to Suicide Silence at work today.... as you do... and i suddenly had this inspiration come over me. so i busted out my phone and quickly made a note of all the things that came whirring through my head, and this is the outcome.

Please bear in mind that this is a rough draught and i will fine tune it when i can.

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:iconkristow:
Wow, this is amazing! I love the theme; I think you've captured the storyline and spirit of the piece so well in so few words. It definitely made me think about beauty as a perception and how it effects us.

It also reminded me of Repo! because of the references to incision and scalpels. Sorry, couldn't help myself! =P

Keep up the good work. :)

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haha. thanks babe. it was quite a strange thing, having decent insperation after such a long time xD id forgotten what it tasted like :P

well im glad you liked it. im thinking of doing a bunch of them.... one for each of the seven sins. ill let you know how it works out


and yes, that did cross my mind as well xD especially 'Night Surgeon'... not so much 'Legal Assassin'

i shall definitely try lol, i have a lot of time to think at work haha, it feels good to have some form of intellectual work going on.

xx

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Haha, I'm so glad you finally got it back! The seven deadly sins would be an amazing idea, you should definitely give it a go!

Looking forward to reading more of your ideas. :)

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:iconshermonic-demon:
haha, i already have one or two ideas for what to write about.

ill run some ideas past you as well at some point, see what you think.

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Sounds good! :)

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:iconshermonic-demon:
indeed

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I dont know who started that fight.... but i KNOW who ended it.
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yummy, thoughts opinions lyrics are what i eat
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Such Anger :heart:

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Blame the cruel Art of Pretension .

:bulletblack: 私を殺した私心 I love you Jennifuck.
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i know, i love anger, it so much fun [=

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